The tag ‘four-part idea’ gives me confidence that this will move somewhere remarkable, but this first piece is a bit… Empty.
Obviously the set-up is important, and the news report is suitably foreboding and intriguing, but I didn’t get a lot from the characters, other than some undertones of marital strain perhaps?
Looking forward to where it’s going, but not blown over backwards by where it’s at – MH :)
Eeee as a hypochondriac I don’t like where this is going lol But otherwise, I denno maybe a little more dialogue would have helped but I think the point is pretty clear.
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