Lost love. The features diminishing over time. Does make you wonder if it was a dream or if you ever loved in the first instance.
“The way you always shine seems a little strange perhaps a better word could describe better his inner charisma.

Makes me feel in a daze just imagining it. Well done :D

thanks marli.. i’ll think on it..

They seem so intense in the moment, but then they fade. Some linger on for periods of years and others fizzle much more quickly. Yet, they don’t seem too different when it’s in the moment. Each love seems equally important.

Very sad but also very weird. Makes you wonder what is reality and what is this person’s misperceptions of reality. Lots of questions, but in a good way.

Love the subtlety of this piece, and the small details of what he brings the character.

Also, he doesn’t deserve you!

I wonder… I’m thinking of a person…
You can feel the hurt. It reverberates through the memory.

I like this. You’re on cloud nine until love shoots you down.

Wonderful. Love how you appreciate the writing of others, but remain a humble professional… as in, “a half-eaten box of chocolate, a daisy from my flower box, the last cookie in your lunch. It made me chuckle every time.” You are one to watch.

watch me! and look out! I’m blasting off!