Nice description of the character, but you could leave out the psycho librarian and move the "you can do it’ line to after the ‘keep a secret’ part, because we are supposed to forget the whole first paragraph.. and there was nothing they ‘can do’ in there. why even mention it? Ficly is the place for surprise twists. :P make the librarian the surprise. I like the rant feel, and the different view of a bookworm, as an enviable person.
ElshaHawk (LoA)