I think you left out your 2nd. word. 2nd paragraph. You could delete the first “had” . Time travel can be a split second or so I am led to believe. No wonder you only remember a glimpse. Good plot.
Neat little bit of story. It could still be that he fell asleep without realizing it for about 2 hours, but the suggestion is there that he went back to the night before.
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