Welcome back!!
And what a grand…
re-entrance?

Takes the character of Dennis and really polishes him up into stellar material – the whole way he describes his and Marty’s ‘subjective’ relationship is wonderfully done, and the tension between the two of them is both… Violent, and sexually charged?

I felt the cliffhanger could have been a little more slick, perhaps a line of dialogue rather than the quite matter-of-fact prose, which cuts out rather quickly.

But great way to move the story forward in an interesting direction – and to rejoin the Ficly fold! MH :)

I don’t mean to be a dick, but it’s “Pachelbel.”

I love the line about the eyes and the naked singularity, though. Charged!

corrected. thanks

Nice to see you back, Radical.

They have history, but he’s still willing to kill her? I’d call that bluff anyday.
Intriguing. I shall go back and read the prequel.