Hmmm… I’m liking, I’m liking much. There could be quite a bit this Time Torn Man could tell, methinks…

Fun and a neat trick there at the end. Made me think of that one by Camus where the ending makes you rethink the whole thing.

They say “what goes round comes round”.
Good storyline m.h.

Really love the recursive nature of the story, even inspired me to write a prequel.

Great job!

I am reminded of the Dread Pirate Roberts.

I’ll admit I was a bit unimpressed. I guess I’m just jaded against the old recursive gag. But then I read the previous story, and I’m beginning to like the joke. There’s a reason the librarian who took that guy’s money was acting smug.

I like the paradox nature of this story, and hope the mystery unfolds in further sequels.

I do like this, very much so.

I like the smooth delivery and licorice twist at the end, paradox describing paradox.

Well written.

I love recursion! Made me think of the end of the Dark Tower series by King, actually, just in that way.