Dropping the f bomb is fine…especially in a creative context…just make sure you check the mature box if you do. Really great opening line, Micky. I dig this one.

:3 thx!

i have a question..will you wright a sequal? i think that would be AWESOEM and guess what!!!! IM TURNIGN 11 ON THRUSDAY! 8D

Oh, that’s wonderful. Happy (early) birthday! Yeah, totally, let me see what I can do tomorrow on my lunch break, ok?

COOL! and im actually a pirtae for halloween.. LOL

Politics definitely isn’t the most interesting thing to talk about with a pirate is it!

Good work thinking about a kid’s view on politics – and on Halloween!

Happy early birthday from me too – MH :)

:3 thx mh!

WooHoo! Featured already! You don’t want to know how loooong it took me to get a story featured. And happy early birthday, too. My 15th is on the 7th. :) Scorpios ROCK. :D

You have improved a ton in the short time you’ve belonged to Ficly. Paragraphing, quotation marks, all that stuff is reading much more smoothly. Keep up the great progress!