Even before the powerful last line socked me in the face I felt the creepy, deep, longing for existence from something that hardly lives at all. The buzzing of the hive and all that reallly plays up the horror feel this had. Very well written, very goood, Hfan!

Horror is always the scariest when it’s the realistic kind, and I think that this would definetly fit into that category.

I agree with Tad, that last line was a real suckerpunch. Niiiiice. :)

This was brilliant. I felt the sorrow the yearning and yeah, the last line killed me. Excellent job.

Thank you all for the wonderful comments!

This was great H/F.