This is really very good indeed – hints at a wider intrigue to do with the ‘timeless man’ beyond just the curiousness of his existence – as well using some great imagery and setting up a good, earnest… Hero? Or agent?

Either way – I really enjoyed it – the only typo I picked up on was that you don’t need the ‘it’ in the last line.

Many thanks for prequelling, and so well! MH :)

Thank you for the kind review and for catching the extra “it”, which I removed. I enjoyed The Time Torn Man quite a bit, enough to motivate me to write here for the first time in a while.

I’m thinking of a sequel to your story right now, we’ll see if my brain will cooperate.

I love the mystery you two have set up. I hope it continues.

Algorithm, just a nit picky typo…first sentence, third paragraph: “an unique” should be “a unique”.