Reminds me of the opening scene in the book Starship Troopers.

I love this. The newly awakened perspective is awesome.

I agree with Jessica, although I’m not sure I understand the title…

Funny piece though. It makes me wonder what made him aware all of the sudden.

Very tragic way to come into awareness. Reads nicely and has good consistency within it. Nice job on the details as well.

Oh god that’s morbid!

That reminds me a lot of this one comic I read, End Town. Without going into detail, some of the tech is given intelligence by removing, brainwashing, and installing the brains of the less fortunate. Things like cars, scanners, and guns.

I mention that, because in this context, that’s got a lot of connotations. Reduce, reuse and recycle.

Also, clever title.

This is an interesting take and if I would have picked up on the title sooner, I would have known before I read it that it was a bomb. I love Monty Python! Good job on the details!

This was so funny. I’m with Horrorfan. I think we tend to slip over the title sometimes to our detriment but this one was so descriptive thats why I read it.

Aah, Monty Python. I’m deprived…Never seen Monty Python, never read Harry Potter.

MONTY PYTHON REFRECNCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESEOME!!!!!!!

Nice POV. Fun piece.

Kihd,

The title comes from MontyPython and the Holy grail and references the Holy Handgrenade of Antioch, and King Arthurs difficulty in counting. You should see it if you can, it’s a hoot. Or should I say Zoot.

Bad bad Zoot. Wicked naughty Zoot.
She has set alight the signal in the tower, which I just recalled is grail shaped. Oh you must punish her.