This is great. I love how you painted the relationship between the characters.

Sheesh, sorry it took so long to get back to you. It didn’t come up on my desk, and I forgot about the challenge… Enough excuses though.

This is very good! You incorporated the information into the story so smoothly, I had to look at the tags to make sure I got the band right. I will definetly look into this band. Thanks for participating!

You win by default! :D

Sadly, I take no pleasure in the win. Thank you for the kind comments. I do wish others had participated. I love learning about new music!!

The way you wrote this makes it feel like the relationship between this couple is like a battlezone. It’s kind of fun. Good work.