I like this. It draws a good picture of life as an adult, far more complex than we expected as kids, contentedly eating our PB&J’s. The last paragraph felt a little shaky. Was ‘warm home’ supposed to have an ‘a’ in front of it maybe? And I didn’t quite get the use of ’it’s’ in the last sentence as the pronoun instead of ‘I’.
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D.E DeWitt
Jesse Blake