You are such a good writer. This serious is wonderfully written and I can’t wait to see where you go with it. So… please go somewhere with it! =)
That’s such pressure!
I’m sure you can handle it… and I’m timing you…
I actually (re)added to what I wrote before. I didn’t like where it went, so I’m starting over from here.
He is ready to just bolt out the door! Such a gentleman for being so calm.. or maybe he knows she can move quickly still and he is being overly cautious. Smooth talker.