Ooh, be careful what you wish for. I think this is good, especially the part where you incorporated
“amen” into the story.
So where is the new brother?…

Bizarre. Hard to say if it’s just a kidnapping or something more like the movie Labyrinth. Way to jump right into the action too.

yeah, where is the new brother? or is that up to our imaginations?

Yeah, this kid really needs to see Labyrinth so she can learn the consequences of wishing. :-)

Wow. Okay, I’m coming in late xP
What a scary situation. Some kind of cultish thing.
May I ask where you got the names from? ‘Nadya’ is unique and it’s also… my name. SCARY!

Thanks everybody for the comments and ratings- as always they mean a lot to me. I hope that I answered most people’s comments with the sequels.
@PJ- I honestly can’t remember. I think Nadya’s original name was Natalyia but something prompted me to change it. Both are pretty but Nadya ended up fitting the story better.