This is gorgeous. I love the way that the narrator has this strong belief that what they’re saying is true. It seems as if they have no doubt in their mind that this person is beautiful. It’s inspiring and incredibly cute.
Lovely poem, and I love the message, especially the reiterations against the doubtful reader questioning if this is for them or actually for that cuter girl next door.
Interesting direction your stories have taken lately; very different from your dark and cynical tone. I like the structure of this poem and the positive energy that’s bursting from the stanzas.
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Jesse Blake