You know, essentially I quite like this, but I’m afraid the capitalisation of every word is horrendously off-putting – it was a struggle to make it to the end.

Nice comparisons between the squirrel and the character, a good sense of claustrophobia and fear – and a well-written if slightly predictable closing sentence, marred by a grammatical tic.

A swift edit could bring this to a lot more people’s attention? MH :)

Thanks. I’m Sorry About The Capitals. I Have OCD…
How Do You Think I Could Edit To Make It Better? (Apart From The Capitals…)
Charlie

I think that it’s pretty cool. If capital letters are the only thing wrong in the piece, it’s good by me.

And on an odd note, I had this OCD thing up until about four years ago where if I touched something with one hand, I had to touch it with the other. It just slowly diminished after awhile. I still sometimes do it when I’m nervous, heheh.

Good story, overall.

Thanks. I’m Trying To Get Over It. I’ve Already Stopped Doing One Thing. I Can Now Go To Resturants On Weekends. I Couldn’t Before. =)
Thanks Again.