This story has a fun tone, I like it. I wonder where it goes from here, is the catalyst the bubble tea, or is something going to work on our narrator?

Funny. It has a ‘Dr. Who’ sort of feel just with how nonchalant and unaffected the character is by it all. Aside from the sci-fi, I think it does a need job of painting a picture of a particular way of going through life.

this is beautiful. I think it is an awesome starting point for a novel, even if only a novella, but definitely you could pull a series of kids books out of it. What an awesome idea…

@scratch’n’scrawl ya, I was thinking about that while I was at my NLS course today. I have started to plan a bit more on the story and character so expect a sequel or prequel sometime in the future

@THX 0477 Thank you for the complement. Just “does a need job”? Did you mean to put down neat?

I like the tone suggesting that something’s off, but not enough to cause major freak out… THX’s Doctor Who comparison’s a good one. Definitely keep going if you’ve more to say with this one!

It feels like the author has come undone from the normal passage of time and is experiencing it as a jumble instead of a straight line or cube.