Very choppy, but I’m not sure if that is bad. In fact I think it reflects the dancing rhythm. And I like how things are edgy, wavy, crashing, and then smoothing. And there is a lot of emotion going on. All of it lends to a good read. Good introspective evaluation of living in the moment— of fears, anxiety, and then ultimately of an unsettling acceptance of a task— and a certain peace resides somewhere within all of the mayhem.
Tad Winslow