This veers from the tepid mundanity of office life to the satanic world of smoke demons and oral sex with such gusto… I can’t help but love it!

It escalates really well, and the last line caps off all the surrealism and randomosity really well – fabulous, appropriately mature, funny work – MH :)

Thanks MH … I enjoyed the hell out of writing it, actually, and that surprised me since the concept seemed so trite in my head. :)

I especially loved the line about what would happen to Nancy in HR. And the pot belly, what a wonderfully creepy image!

I dig the belly full of snakes.

The line saying that she killed her mom was a punch in the face. Totally awesome!

Hahaha…. I like this a lot. The careening humor of it reminds me of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. Nice work.

It was unexpected, bitchy but brilliantly entertaining!