Gah, the last line is so great! Little proofread remark though: you’ve got an extra “my” in the second sentence. Otherwise, strong work.
Gah, the last line is so great!
Little proofread remark though: you’ve got an extra “my” in the second sentence. Otherwise, strong work.
Fixed! And also slightly edited further. Thank you for the interest in our work! I’m glad that you like it so far.
Jessica Cahill
Robert Quick