Funny and kind of lampoons just how goofy such a thing might appear in real life.
This is quite delightful. I love Rachel’s dramatics.
I always enjoyed the parts of Watchmen that insinuated all the costumed crimefighters had been fetishist perverts.
I whole heartedly agree with Gallenberg. Rachel is quite the character.. and (it would seem) rather insecure. The only downside was I felt that the end didn’t have as much punch as it could have. Four smiling pencils.
I whole heartedly agree with Gallenberg. Rachel is quite the character.. and (it would seem) rather insecure.
The only downside was I felt that the end didn’t have as much punch as it could have.
Four smiling pencils.
As Dr. Tim likes to say — AWESOME!! I love back and forth dialog and I feel like you really tried to get in the head of each of your characters with some compelling conflict. You’re a talented writer.
Awesome! Funny yet poignant.
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