Ewwwww…Awesome! I love gory stories, and this one was very Stephen King-esque. Totally cool!

I liked the scene with the disgusted officer. You created a very gritty and grimy crime scene here that’s soaked in blood. I have to say that the guy in the trunk just doesn’t feel right to me. Maybe it’s the lack of space for fleshing the idea out or maybe it’s the whole fridge logic taint that I sense on it.

I wish I could have used more characters so that I could have made the trunk man less abrupt.