Paragraph 3 is rife with gleeful fairy goodness. Well done, your range of skills is commendable, considering the fact you just sequeled a story about Motorcycle babes.
I never thought I’d be entertained by a story about a tooth fairy but yuo sure showed me! Reminds me vaguely of Artemis Fowl (but I’ve only read the one about fairies) but different. Nice job and cheers!