Well that got really twisted at the end, after being pretty twisted by the beginning. Very dark and disturbing, so nicely, horridly done.

Woah that was horrible!! But in an amazing way, possibly the best of the challenge so far! Fab, even the title is genious!

Ooh…nasty bad guy. Love it!

Side note, second paragraph, you’ve got an uncapitalized “shall”. Other than that, good job, gave me goose bumps!

Thank you for the correction