Due to a computer with what seems like dementia, I’m not going to edit that last line. It should read: “unhinging his decomposing jaw.” This was already the third time I’ve written this story, and I’m not about to do it a fourth. Just so you know.
This is excellently written, khid! I enjoyed this a whole lot. The last line made me wonder though… āIām gonna eat you up!ā he screamed, unhinging decomposing his jaw."
did you mean …. “unhinging his decomposing jaw.” ? or …“unhinging his extenuating jaw.” ?
Yep, forgot to edit that little piece of literary flub. I’m a bit afraid to edit it though, because regardless of if I save it as a draft, it still gets deleted! I might have a plan to combat this problem…
Rambling done. Thanks for the comment and rating! :)