It’s blunt and unsparing. And I especially adore not just that it rhymes so well, but the words you rhyme with, PJ, whether you are aware of this or not idk, but the rhymes don’t jump out at all. They have this magical way of blending in— somehow subtly. I don’t know how you do it, but I’ve noticed it in your previous poems as well.
Tad Winslow