Never written a sequel here before. Just wanted to try it. Pales in comparison to Murj’s awesome story, but it was fun.

Cool to see you jumping in with a sequel, especially with such a dastardly situation. The characters come through, very stark, gritty individuals. The opening bit might have benefited from one more ‘he said’ or ‘she said’ to keep clear who was talking.

Thanks — fun stuff! Murj’s father character in this sorta reminded me of the actor Robert Forster, though I’m not sure we were on the same page with that.