Surrealistic.

Smoothly narrated view into the mind of the hunter.

“els the kill is murder”

Was “else” the intended word here?

Spelling errors break the enchantment of even a perfect story.

Great otherwise.

Doh. Cheers, Bob.

Thanks for the comment

Sounds to me like a hard way to gain understanding… lol. All of your writing has such a strong voice. This story reminds me of Steinbeck’s “The Bear” one of my favorites of his.