It’s a lovely moment, the sentimental writer returning to the ‘source’ so to speak. Your piece suffers from inconsistent use of verb tense. You have past and present mixed all together. It’s a horrendous pet peeve of mine, I know, but it really disrupts the readability and believability of a piece. For beginning writers I generally recommend (or at least I have decided to now) avoiding the present tense. It has its uses [also note the possessive pronoun form should be its and not it’s], but more than likely it’s just going to trip you up.

Thanks!
Reading back through it I saw what you mean.

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Welcome back. I love the visuals here. This story in itself is like you reacquainting yourself with your muse.

Glad to return – it’s been too long.

Pretty much.

I keep coming back to this one . . . It’s so lovely. I can feel the atmosphere
:)