I really like this. The disappointment at the end is almost tangible.
First I see the vulgar title, then I see your zombie-looking avatar, then I read your ficlet…love it!!!!
Love it and love the writing style/tone.
I think I’ll find a quiet corner and have a little cry now…
I want to hear more.
Hilarious! It’s like they’re kids playing in a sandbox, except they’re adults on the Moon. Nice feel to it.
I hadn’t thought about it like children playing in a sandbox, but that’s exactly what it is. I appreciate the observation! Thanks for all the comments!
Wow, awesome story! Your poor protagonist must be so sad! I feel for him.
That’s a great story. The title is a bit of an attention grabber, but it’s pretty clearly what Steve is thinking by the end.
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