Your writing has improved so much since the beginning of your ficly’s career, I enjoyed this story!

Oh, a very interesting idea! I especially liked the detail about Anastasia playing with Angela’s hair.

The line “she slammed me into the mirror, severely injuring me” doesn’t work for me. It feels like a clinical summation of events, not words a real person would use to describe being thrown into a mirror.

Thanks for sharing this story on Ficly!