Poetry is something I haven’t done a lot of with so please forgive my inexperience. After all, what kind of poetry is a hillbilly like me capable of? Maybe something about cement ponds and opossum stew? That considered, I think this reads like a rap. Yo! Check it.

Romance, thruster, til dawn, playful bite… should this be marked mature? ;)

Love it! You created an awesome rhythm.

@ RoseTone

haha, yes, yes it should ;)

@ The Electric Hillbilly

I’d love to see a ‘southern rendition’ of this if you have it in you. And yeah, I listen to lots of music, Hip-Hop included, and HH influenced.

Buahaha I wonder if I know what this is about! That just makes it more intriguing.

unearthing worms? birthing? lady of the night? sounds zombie-esque.

No confirmed answers, Elsha! J/k it’s a mix of fear, sex, fun, children, life, make believe, good humor, oh and food! It’s a perspective on life— which in itself can be taken many different ways— and the poem should reflect that.

Stop, drop, and roll because you’re on FIYAH! Your writing lately has been out of this world! This poem totally rocks.