Great sequel and the ending (as always with you) gives us a cliffhanger that I truly like. Thanks for taking the time. We all seem to be having fun with this one. I’ll sequel one of yours in return.

Another great story in an intriguing series!

If you were to revise this story, I would suggest giving an indication of where Marisa’s wounds are.

Ooh, I like it. She winds up seeming very animal-like and desperate by the end. Thanks for jumping on with a sequel!

Hey, you hit the front page! Congrats!

Thanks for all the comments — and the feature! Too cool!

Story really working well so far. Look forward to reading more.