Cool to see you jumping in with a sequel, always fun. Brutal scene here. The violent part could use some tweaking, like his dialog going unintelligible at some point secondary to pain. Also, the two attacks to the nuts seemed redundant, but maybe I’m just personally against gratuitous testicular violence.

THX is hilarious,— “..gratuitous testicular violence”— is the funniest phrasing, even if it wasn’t meant to be… and probably that THX is against it is the funniest part. Though I can’t help but agree with him. You have much different stuff than this, Electric, I know it, but I felt compelled to comment cuz the only thing holding this back is all of the gratuity. That just shows your range though ;) And in your defense, that’s just how some characters are, they can be no other way, so for staying true to them I give you praise. Not everyone is a sophisticated contributor to society, and those people can make for some intriguing scripts! Good work.

Thanks, Tad. This was inspired by a young Birmingham couple I observed at the gym recently. They were a couple with a penchant for steroids, whiskey, and snicker bars…not necessarily in that order. Indeed, not my best work, but certainly an honest attempt nonetheless! Thanks 4 the comments dudes!