It might be a good work in need of some polish, maybe a little more fleshing out. It might be overwhelmingly pedestrian. I can’t tell. Any chance of a re-write? I’d love to see it a little more complete.
It might be a good work in need of some polish, maybe a little more fleshing out. It might be overwhelmingly pedestrian. I can’t tell.
Any chance of a re-write? I’d love to see it a little more complete.
J.M.V.