Wow, that sounds like an awesome story. I love the mash up of science vs magic and organized crime. Certainly seems like you gave yourself a lot of avenues and things to keep track of to push towards that 50,000 word count.

I love the title. The story reads like a book treatment and it’s good! Love to see where you take this very imaginative piece.

Thanks for the kind words, guys!

THX: it was definitely what the kids call a “hot mess.” It’ll be fun going back through all those ideas and picking out the gems in the subplot pileup.