You can run from death but you can’t hiiiiide! I liked it. Introspective and something that I’d like to read more of, or possibly add on to myself if you leave it be for a bit. It reads in places like a poem— the frosty scowls and such are left unclear (at the moment) just like a poem tends to describe certain items with emotion in place of exactness.

Thanks for the comment, Tad. Would love it if you added to this.

It’s like a dream, very other-worldly and surreal from the bones to the phoenix. It also feels cold, with the ice and the rejection and the death and the companion-less-ness.

Very surreal, I loved the uncertainty of what was going to happen and there’s a couple of descriptions in there which I loved. Nice read :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bXnw5i0frZw

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Since you mentioned the christian nuances and hardcore rap as one of your likes… then you need to hear this above… Jedi Mind Tricks…

And this…

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=va7ZCn14Q6c&feature=related

And this…

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tRAaW8SsgSo&feature=related

And the whole dang Album! haha

Cool, thanks for the comments everyone & Tad I will check that link out now.

Cool, thanks for the comments everyone & Tad I will check that link out now.

nice hill! :p i liked it alot

Good job at present tense. The crystal makes it a semi-mystical story.

Hey, thanks for the feature, Ficly. Just noticed this.