I like how you made him speak her name mis-spelled— as if to add one extra ‘this guy’s a moron’ detail. This story is really great, and super witty. It inspired the ficly I wrote just above it. Thanks for getting me going I.M.C !

Aww Thank you.

Oh, that mis-spelling wasn’t intended… I still think it would have worked either way. You’re welcome :)

Teehee I wish I could deter men this easily. Elenore is my role model <3

…“It must be the essence of Hell I brought with me.”…

Domination!!

I think her dad being the owner of the bar is the best comeback ever. Nicely done.