Curious. This leads us with enough information, but not enough at the same time. Well done!

This is amazing. Very well written. I love the line: “At eleven years old, Trevor was shaking off the tail end of childhood but not yet ready to learn the truths of manhood”

This is very well constructed. It’s mundane and extraordinary at the same time, squeezing a lot of emotion from a snapshot of the characters. Loved it!