I like the use of the sense of sound with the car doors & engines in the opening. That first paragraph is a winner. I like the gritty / end of their rope tone & direction this series has taken. Dark with many unanswered questions. Thanks for continuing your series. I want to sequel it if I find the time.

Thanks man, I hope you can sequel it because I want to see where other people think about taking this :D

And if you carry this on, then so am I after you :)