Awww! Poor kid. I hope he gets out of it.

That was a surprise ending! The sentence about people who love the circus genuinley work in it seems thrown in there. Because of the limited characters i’m assuming you couldn’t extend any further with it. However this is a marvelous entry. I love it.

About that sentence, I tried to show contrast between the workers and the crowd but re-reading it through I can see what you mean. I’ll go through and try to revise it slightly.

And thanks for the kind comments guys :)

HAHA. Beast! That ending was a riot. The details drew me in, only to spit me out again when I read the last line. Epic. :B