Very nice. The title was very well thought out also.
Ah, the sadder but wiser girl. Funny how young women always fall for the liar. True to life. Good work.
Ah, the sadder but wiser girl. Funny how young women always fall for the liar.
True to life. Good work.
Cool poem, a sort of level-headed jilted ex just giving a friendly heads up to the next in line. The 9 months was an ominous choice of timing. Nice last line too.
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