Saw Tangled today, which made me want to write something to the effect of a fairytale. Not quite sure where I’m going with this, so feel free to write sequels if you want. Write as many as you want. Could be fun.

I am such a sucker for this sort of thing. You’ve set up the world beautifully and I am instantly intrigued.

This is a great start to a fairy tale: intrigue and great descriptions.