Nicely done. I like the first line. I think a lot of people can relate to this, no matter what sorrow they have felt.

:D really? thx!

I felt this one… it has a nice flow and strong sentiments without giving too much or too little.

I second those comments. The first line is so…prolific, I think the word is? Disregarding of my lack of brains tonight, this is pretty awesome. Love it!

Writing is so therapeutic when you really need it.

Oh wow! I just noticed how you entered it into the time traveler challenge thingy.

Am I correct to think that you are talking about how a person makes a complete cycle of some sort? The seventh line leads me to believe that they have gone through a lot of trouble to just end up where they were in the beginning. A total eclipse of the heart, so to speak.

That makes it makes it even more awesome, because that is a pretty creative take on the challenge.

:D