Kind of a cutesy scene, which seems a bit different than how I remember the series starting. I might have been more inclined to run with it, but you’ve got some typos that are distracting, and the ‘mushed-together-anti-paragraph’ style is just hard to read.
Yes, I agree, absolutely adorable scene you’ve set up here. This conversation reminds me of how my friends and I used to have fun in the cafeteria in elementary school…. ah who am I kidding? We acted that way in college too. Great vocabularly in this one, Micky.
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Tad Winslow