5 for creativity and imagination. That 2nd paragraph says a lot in a few words, following my “less is more” philosophy. What a tragic ending. I like the emotional shift from beginning to end. Makes for a more meaningful scene.
Poor girl. I always wonder what I’m going to think about when I’m dying… or if I’ll think anything at all, because death can really sneak up one you. Another combat story, my my! Your stories are always so action packed, a real breath of fresh air! I also give you five outta five. :)
Poor girl. I always wonder what I’m going to think about when I’m dying… or if I’ll think anything at all, because death can really sneak up one you.
Another combat story, my my! Your stories are always so action packed, a real breath of fresh air! I also give you five outta five. :)
*on you
:D YAY! OH! and i think i should add.. My inspiration cam from the song, “Hide and Seek” by Imogne heap.. :p thx guys!
I liked this. Makes you think.
I can see this happening now all in slow motion cuz of the hide and seek part. Brilliant!
The Electric Hillbilly 
Kihd 
Riley 
Paige Elizabeth 
Gradual Uprising {LoA}