One of the silliest zombie installments I’ve read to date. The main guy sounds like his next line should be something about napalm in the morning. I’m never a big fan of fragment use when a comma or dash or semicolon would work, but that’s just me.
I did write him in that type of style deliberately, characters like that always tickled my funny bone and I’d always wanted to write one like this. I’m afraid if you’re not fond of those type of quotes then you may not like the future sequels lol.
Was it the one worded Zombies sentence that was bugging you?
And thanks Mickydoodle3 for your feedback, I’m glad you enjoyed it as much as you did :)
Riley
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