I like the strong resolve to survive that you’ve instilled in your character. Very intense action scene and it’s a well told story. And quite imaginative with the made up language.. unless I’m just ignorant to other cultures and you’re actually using another totally legit language for the enemies voice.. haha. I’m always so surprised at how articulate and polished you are with language for a youngin. I guess I shouldn’t be surprised anymore <3 great job.
Riley
Riley
Tad Winslow
Riley