This…was beautifully done. Graphic without being vulgar, or being particularly graphic! It was poetic and natural…so well done sir.

The was a wild ride, movie comical, and yet rated R. :)

Very nicely done, and definitely hits that R rating without going X rated. I like the humor of it as well.

I can only really echo the comments so far here – smutty, but with a healthy dose of literary dignity thrown in for good measure… MH :)

I love the detached yet intimate way this is done. The detail is stunning. I got nervous shivers in my knees :P

Beautifully written, congratulations! It strikes just the right balance.

I was wondering whether, near the end, you perhaps mean to write “Do you want me to get that?”