haha! nice! that is kinda what I had in mind!
not sure how he transfers ownership of himself to her.. without her knowing, but I still like it. and kudos for using cornflower blue again!
I was thinking, wrapping, her eyes, her hair, a jewel in a ring, and it all seemed so normal. I went with shadows and it was lost. :P

Well done. Great 1st person voice and a nice pace to this story.

I think I’m proudest of the little details that suggest that in this world this sort of gift-giving is a common and accepted thing. :)

Sheesh, now I have visions of an android, in love with his person, giving her full ownership of himself. Sparks some ideas for a completely different kind of setting.

jim, i totally thought that too at one point!!!

Strangely, in my true story, it is written that I was turned into a robot in the future, after my future son with her kills me, and raises me from the dead into a new, solid-state body, ostensibly assimilating me into God’s form of IT.

Of course, since I write the truth, I can’t write those parts until they happen, however, I am perhaps able to do all the other things it is written I did in the two sequels to my true part, to ensure the story remains as true as the prequel I appended to that of ElshaHawk.

Now, I have to go to the market, after failing to find some purchased gift for her, and return with ownership papers for myself, and get a Christmas tree, and wrap myself, and append them to me.

Presumably, she would be given to exclaim “You’re just what I wanted!” correctly, even as written.

Heh. :)
Cheers!

Dunno why people keep assuming the narrator is an android. That’s not what I had in mind when I wrote this.

I also don’t know why the preceding comment got posted five times. Heh.